My best friend is Mary. She lives in a tall building. She lives on the fifth floor. Everyday she takes the lift up and down. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair, two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her. We are in the same class. I like to read books but she likes playing games. She likes to eat popcorn and ice creams. I like them, too. Her favourite food is fish, so she is clever. She loves her cat. She often plays with her. The cat likes Mary, too. They are cute.
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我最好的朋友是玛丽。她住在一个高高的建筑物里。她住在第五层。每天她都要上下电梯。她十二岁。她又高又瘦。她有短的黑头发，两只大眼睛和一个小嘴巴。她很可爱。我喜欢和她一起玩。我们在同一个班级。我喜欢读书，但她喜欢玩游戏。她喜欢吃爆米花和冰淇淋。我也喜欢他们。她最喜欢的食物是鱼，所以她很聪明。她爱她的猫。她经常和她玩。猫也喜欢玛丽。他们很可爱。
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小作者从外貌、年龄、住址、爱好、一起做的事等五个方面介绍了她最好的朋友玛丽。