A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior high school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.
一个好老师对学生来说就像一颗闪亮的星星。我的高中英语老师李老师是我生命中的一颗璀璨的明星。
When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty in learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation. I could not get high marks and my grammar was not right at all. Frustrated and afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class. When Miss Li found out my situation, she encouraged me and lent me a hand. She patiently taught me English grammar, helped me understand how to write a good sentence,and lent me many English books and magazines, which rapidly improved my English. With her help, I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.
当我开始高中生活的时候，我在学习英语方面遇到了困难。我不敢在公共场合大声说英语，因为我的发音和语调不好。我得不到高分，语法也不太好。在英语课上，我既沮丧又害怕被人嘲笑，从不举手回答问题。当李小姐发现我的情况时，她鼓励我并帮了我一把。她耐心地教我英语语法，帮助我理解如何写一个好句子，还借给我许多英语书籍和杂志，这使我的英语水平迅速提高。在她的帮助下，我对英语产生了兴趣，并最终获得了高分。
Miss Li, like a shining star, shines in my path of success.
李小姐像一颗闪亮的星星，闪耀着我成功的道路