要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
参考译文
刘凯是我的同班同学。他是一个总是乐于助人的好学生。
有一天在去学校的路上，他看见一个小女孩横穿马路。一辆汽车迅速地向她开来，这车离撞到她很近了，就在这时刘凯冲了上去抓住了她的手臂。小女孩得救了。她告诉他她住在哪里，他带她回家。当刘凯急忙赶到教室，老师已经开始了他的课。他告诉老师他迟到的原因。他被誉为他做了什么。