2021年云南中考英语作文题目答案
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One possible version;
Doing Housework Makes Me Happy
Doing housework is part of our life. It's necessary to share housework wit other familymembers. I'd like to teli you one of my experiences
Last Mother's Day Imade a special dinner for my mom Itdidn't workas well asI thought. Ihurtmy fingers while cutting carrots, andI forgottoput saltinto the dishes. When my mom cameback home, she was happy to taste them. Then she hogged me and said,"Good girl!"
From this experience, I've learned doing housework can not only help me grow up but alsobring happiness to my family.
书面表达评分标准
一档:(12-15分)内容切恩、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言表达错误。
二档:(8-11分):内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少。
三档:(5-7分):内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达错误较多。
四档(1-4分):有一定内容、但语音表达错误很多。
(注意:书面表达语法错误全卷扣分不得超过2分; 单词拼写错误全卷扣分不得超过2分; 抄袭卷中阅读材料的, 抄袭部分不给分。)
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